This is our final evaluation! We uploaded it to scribd and its a PDF file which is why the clips don't play, but we put it on another CD which is with our final products. :)

Final Evaluation Phoebe and Issy LAST ONE

Feedback results

From out feedback from survey monkey , most of the results came back positive , alot of people (16-25) said that our local newspaper would appeal to them especially as we have combined the conventions of a tabloid newspaper, magazine and local newspaper. From our first results the audience said they didn't like our masthead font as it looked too military , we then changed it and the feedback was positive towards the masthead. People generally liked the way we had a serious issue article and then fun things so it was a bit of a mixture but generally a fun young local newspaper but for the youth to be able to get involved in local problems.     The feedback did help us as it made us positive that our final finished local newspaper was attractive towards young people and would be something that they would definatly pick up and read.

Heres our finish product of our radio ad 

Our phone call to Ham and High Newspaper Offices

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click on this link to hear our Phone call :) 


This is a phone call that we made to Ham and High offices to talk to an editor and representitive about they're target audience. We recorded the conversation by using two blackberry smartphone, one i was talking into on load speaker and the other phone was recording. We spoke to someone who was willing to answer the questions we wanted to ask.

Our Poster

This is our final poster to link with our newspaper. I think it turned out very well because a lot of young people we have spoke to have given us good feedback about it and they have been able to make the connection between our newspaper with the poster, which is what we were aiming for.

This is the oringinal picture we took which haden't been edited yet.

This is were we started using photoshop, we edited the ligh and contrast and then took out the writing from her cap so we could put Eholla in.

FINAL FRONT PAGE AND SECOND PAGE

These are my two final front cover and second cover pages, I am happy with the final product. I've continued my first page article onto the second page and used conventions from a tabloid newspaper, like crossheads, by line, sub heading, contents, vox pop etc but also conventions from a local newspaper and magazine. I kept making alot of small changes but in the end I am happy with the results.

Take our Survey

Click on link below to take our survey and give us you feedback ! :)

Click here to take survey

This is a survey we made with questions about our local newspaper, we made it on survey monkey, you can accses this through our blog and our facebook or print the page up and pass them around. The main aim for this survey was to get feedback about the style, genre, representation, article etc. We wanted to see mainly would this appeal to our target audience 16-25 year olds. This would then tell us if we needed to make any changes to fit the standards we wanted them too.